Paper 2 Challenges

     Paper two was another great way to go back into the book and into our brains and be able to write. However, like all english papers, they come with their own set of challenges. 

    I really did like the premise of the paper. It really had us go back into the book and think about some of the most important points that the book talks about. It also allowed us to think creatively about some of the ways that Vaughan was trying to get us to think. 

    I think that the hardest thing about writing this paper was really finding quotes that fit perfectly into my writing. It was challenging to find quotes that matched my topic, without worrying about it also leaking into another value that is written about. Also, trying to think of ideas that had to do with self sufficiency. 

    Overall, I do think my paper came out alright. I hope that Lance is able to give me feedback that can help get my grade up from whatever it comes out to. Fingers crossed. 

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